A DRABBLE - 100 words exactly.
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kribbanI'm back to dabbling with FPF, and with Het and with BDSM. Inspired by ROTK and the people at Tolkien_BDSM, I wrote this little drabble. It's been betad and re-written but please give me constructive criticism if you have any tips on how to make it better.
Title: Substitution
Author: Kristina [k7@telia.com]
Pairing: No real paring but unrequited Aragorn / Eowyn
Rating: R for implied violence. No sex.
Word count: 100. I dare you to count them.
Feedback: Sure.
Archive: No.
Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters or anything LOTR-related. Tolkien does. I’m just borrowing them, and not making any profit doing it either. No copyright infringement intended.
Warnings: BDSM.
Summary: Aragorn is too noble for his own good.
Author’s Notes: My het-attempts never come out as actual het! Nonetheless, it’s man-woman!BDSM and Eowyn!lust. Inspired not so much by the film ROTK but by the book where Aragorn speaks about his guilt over Eowyn being in love with him. Poor Aragorn.
Dedicated to Moony and to Leetal for the beta.
No fault was his, but he felt at fault,
Ashamed of something he had no power over.
So it came about that,
with the approval of his wife,
he called the lady Eowyn to his chamber.
He couldn’t give her what she wanted,
so he gave her what she asked for.
Proud, she would come to him, breathless adoration in her eyes.
He told himself
Such waste of spirit
Made him sick at heart.
Shaken, she would leave subjugated and bruised, but never bleeding.
Her heart was broken by him,
But he couldn’t let her leave with her cuts unhealed.
Title: Substitution
Author: Kristina [k7@telia.com]
Pairing: No real paring but unrequited Aragorn / Eowyn
Rating: R for implied violence. No sex.
Word count: 100. I dare you to count them.
Feedback: Sure.
Archive: No.
Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters or anything LOTR-related. Tolkien does. I’m just borrowing them, and not making any profit doing it either. No copyright infringement intended.
Warnings: BDSM.
Summary: Aragorn is too noble for his own good.
Author’s Notes: My het-attempts never come out as actual het! Nonetheless, it’s man-woman!BDSM and Eowyn!lust. Inspired not so much by the film ROTK but by the book where Aragorn speaks about his guilt over Eowyn being in love with him. Poor Aragorn.
Dedicated to Moony and to Leetal for the beta.
No fault was his, but he felt at fault,
Ashamed of something he had no power over.
So it came about that,
with the approval of his wife,
he called the lady Eowyn to his chamber.
He couldn’t give her what she wanted,
so he gave her what she asked for.
Proud, she would come to him, breathless adoration in her eyes.
He told himself
Such waste of spirit
Made him sick at heart.
Shaken, she would leave subjugated and bruised, but never bleeding.
Her heart was broken by him,
But he couldn’t let her leave with her cuts unhealed.
