kribban | Nov. 16th, 2003

Today I typed up an old Mary Sue I had written... (hopefully the only MS I have written though my first fanfiction heroine Gish sure seems to have some MS-ish qualities after discussions with

silversolitaire And it was RPF... but it was GEN and she was the guy's daughter so it's not that bad... I think...)

Incidentally, it was the first FPF I ever wrote. (Not that it's the first of many - in the four years since I've only written one more FPF.) I've reported it, with witty comments, to

marysues. Check it out. But I am also posting it here, not because it's good (it isn't!) but because I have fond memories of this story and because it's friggin' femslash, OKAY!!! And it's lesbian!Trinity from-the-first-film-before-TPTB-destroyed-her.

So yeah... I was such a Trinity fangirl when I was 19 it's not funny. Unhealthily fangirly even. ;-)
This isn't very good (language-wise), nor very plausible (plot-wise, see

marysues-entry for witty comments) and as I said a total Mary Sue. But hey - I was young and a bad writer!

Enjoy! ;-)

( Kristina Sues herself )